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		<title>Comment on And Sometimes It All Seems To Go Right by nwfkwjhpek</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2011/11/22/and-sometimes-it-all-seems-to-go-right/#comment-190</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Feb 2012 10:29:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[H4NDTA  &lt;a href=&quot;http://wmagnoityusk.com/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;wmagnoityusk&lt;/a&gt;]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>H4NDTA  <a href="http://wmagnoityusk.com/" rel="nofollow">wmagnoityusk</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Veronica Lifts Off At Last! by Kathleen Cassen Mickelson</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kathleen Cassen Mickelson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 16:50:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congratulations, Camille. I loved the first chapter. This is going to be a fun adventure. One of my favorite books is the result of serialization: Tales of the City by Armistead Maupin. May Every Day Novels be every bit as successful.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations, Camille. I loved the first chapter. This is going to be a fun adventure. One of my favorite books is the result of serialization: Tales of the City by Armistead Maupin. May Every Day Novels be every bit as successful.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Veronica Lifts Off At Last! by J.C. Towler</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2012/01/23/veronica-lifts-off-at-last/#comment-161</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[J.C. Towler]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 15:13:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Now you must know how the gold-panner feels when she sluices away the sand and water and finds a five ounce gold nugget staring back at her!  Lot of hard work went into getting this off the ground.  Congratulations and I&#039;m enjoying the read so far.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Now you must know how the gold-panner feels when she sluices away the sand and water and finds a five ounce gold nugget staring back at her!  Lot of hard work went into getting this off the ground.  Congratulations and I&#8217;m enjoying the read so far.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Veronica Lifts Off At Last! by robert</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2012/01/23/veronica-lifts-off-at-last/#comment-160</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jan 2012 11:49:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Congrats! It&#039;s a very cool idea, and I wish you guys the best of luck. Personally, I&#039;m too impatient to wait for each chapter, so I&#039;m holding off for the eventual e-book to gobble it all up at once :-)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats! It&#8217;s a very cool idea, and I wish you guys the best of luck. Personally, I&#8217;m too impatient to wait for each chapter, so I&#8217;m holding off for the eventual e-book to gobble it all up at once <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Playing Your Way to a Plot by Kathleen Cassen Mickelson</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2012/01/06/playing-your-way-to-a-plot/#comment-157</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Kathleen Cassen Mickelson]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jan 2012 21:20:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is a great way to shake up my head...or anyone else&#039;s. Nice!
My ritual game is Alchemy. :-) Then WordTwist. Then Blitz. Depends on the time of day.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a great way to shake up my head&#8230;or anyone else&#8217;s. Nice!<br />
My ritual game is Alchemy. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  Then WordTwist. Then Blitz. Depends on the time of day.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Playing Your Way to a Plot by Camille Gooderham Campbell</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2012/01/06/playing-your-way-to-a-plot/#comment-155</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Camille Gooderham Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2012 20:21:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks, John!

I&#039;ve tried the Sims, and it was fun to play for a little while, but to be honest I found it gave both too much and too little choice to be much use at generating ideas -- it&#039;s the randomness of Tiny Tower&#039;s characters and settings that makes it so great, with the relationships open to imagination, whereas I found the Sims to be more about making coins so you could choose stuff to buy, and then the relationship responses were unpredictable and hard to control (almost the complete opposite). I also get irritated by games that demand too much interaction (play all the time or your character gets depressed, etc.).

But that&#039;s just me. Anyone who finds that Tiny Tower doesn&#039;t give the player enough design control and/or wants more emo input from the game would probably appreciate the Sims.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, John!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve tried the Sims, and it was fun to play for a little while, but to be honest I found it gave both too much and too little choice to be much use at generating ideas &#8212; it&#8217;s the randomness of Tiny Tower&#8217;s characters and settings that makes it so great, with the relationships open to imagination, whereas I found the Sims to be more about making coins so you could choose stuff to buy, and then the relationship responses were unpredictable and hard to control (almost the complete opposite). I also get irritated by games that demand too much interaction (play all the time or your character gets depressed, etc.).</p>
<p>But that&#8217;s just me. Anyone who finds that Tiny Tower doesn&#8217;t give the player enough design control and/or wants more emo input from the game would probably appreciate the Sims.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Playing Your Way to a Plot by Camille Gooderham Campbell</title>
		<link>http://copyeditproof.com/2012/01/06/playing-your-way-to-a-plot/#comment-156</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Camille Gooderham Campbell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2012 20:10:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you for reblogging, Don.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for reblogging, Don.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Playing Your Way to a Plot by J.C. Towler</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[J.C. Towler]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2012 14:17:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Sounds like you might like the Sims, Camille!  Good article.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds like you might like the Sims, Camille!  Good article.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Playing Your Way to a Plot by Don Carnagey~Lanier</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Don Carnagey~Lanier]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jan 2012 06:14:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Reblogged this on &lt;a href=&quot;http://donswritingadvice.wordpress.com/2012/01/07/playing-your-way-to-a-plot/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Writing Advice and Tecnhiques&lt;/a&gt;.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reblogged this on <a href="http://donswritingadvice.wordpress.com/2012/01/07/playing-your-way-to-a-plot/" rel="nofollow">Writing Advice and Tecnhiques</a>.</p>
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		<title>Comment on And Sometimes It All Seems To Go Right by shgd</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Nov 2011 20:59:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You brought a smile to my face from your first paragraph and with each paragraph the grin got bigger.  Oh you day-brightener you!!! YOU my dear are one of those people!!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You brought a smile to my face from your first paragraph and with each paragraph the grin got bigger.  Oh you day-brightener you!!! YOU my dear are one of those people!!</p>
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